Comments on: THE LOVE I NEVER HAD (version 11)

By: murphy

murphy — Mon, 29 Mar 2021 10:09:29 +0000

By: Gerald Aluda

Gerald Aluda — Mon, 15 Jun 2020 11:30:09 +0000

In reply to ShannyBae. Thumbs up. Your story is captivating and one thing that you have mastered is the fact that you can walk readers through your experience. This was no doubt a masterpiece

By: Jerry Alvin

Jerry Alvin — Mon, 01 Jun 2020 08:01:48 +0000

A nice read Fatuma. You’ve kept it direct and concise. You doing a splendid job.

By: Charles Mbithi

Charles Mbithi — Thu, 28 May 2020 12:52:09 +0000

A nice one, especially the anti-climax. A dialogue would have been very natural here.

By: Tako nusu

Tako nusu — Fri, 22 May 2020 15:57:20 +0000

Meeeeeeen nlikukataza simu za wenyewe ona sasamen are trash!!!!! Nice one broo ungengoja upendwe at least

By: Cassie

Cassie — Fri, 22 May 2020 13:22:59 +0000

This is amazing Fatma

By: Thairu

Thairu — Fri, 22 May 2020 08:12:12 +0000

In reply to ShannyBae. Vivid.brilliantly written.Hats off.Completely loved the story.Kuddos.

By: Bonnie

Bonnie — Fri, 22 May 2020 06:16:43 +0000

Love is complicated

By: Godwin

Godwin — Thu, 21 May 2020 16:03:47 +0000

The story was so interesting at the start, was imagining that it could end that way,,,nwey it was a nice piece@fatu. Put
in more efforts to make your story more real.

By: Tina mutheu

Tina mutheu — Thu, 21 May 2020 10:03:54 +0000

Wow such a great piece fatuu